Aphelia Design Critique/Tips?

heta-tan

Genderless Goon
Global Mod
Supporter
Defender of Defoko
Hey y'all

I'm currently trying to make a design for Mayu Wakana's/Aphelia's English bank. I want it to have a similar feel to the COSMOS/Japanese designs (http://sta.sh/24kezemob4k?edit=1) in terms of the colours and certain features while still having it be sort of different since it's going to be Aphelia not Mayu?

Here's a sketch of what I currently have:
aphelia_design_maybe_by_sfrey4138-daqa8mr.png


I'm not sure if I'm going in the right direction, if I should add anything or take away anything. Should I change any of the colours or try a different approach? Please give me your thoughts!
 

sailor _ravioli

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko
I actually really like her design its really unique!! The color scheme is good too and goes well together!