Aphelia Design Critique/Tips?

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  1. heta-tan

    heta-tan Genderless Goon Supporter Defender of Defoko

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    Hey y'all

    I'm currently trying to make a design for Mayu Wakana's/Aphelia's English bank. I want it to have a similar feel to the COSMOS/Japanese designs (http://sta.sh/24kezemob4k?edit=1) in terms of the colours and certain features while still having it be sort of different since it's going to be Aphelia not Mayu?

    Here's a sketch of what I currently have:
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    I'm not sure if I'm going in the right direction, if I should add anything or take away anything. Should I change any of the colours or try a different approach? Please give me your thoughts!
     
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  3. sailor _ravioli

    sailor _ravioli Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    I actually really like her design its really unique!! The color scheme is good too and goes well together!
     

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