Criticism and Help-Six Same Faces (Type A)~Osomatsu-san ED

Mougeki Mero

Defoko's Slaves
Defender of Defoko
I am haviing lots of troubles to make this UST XD Well, I like my job at the main song, but the there are some parts that looks to be...off key...I managed to fix some, but I am lost at the 2nd part...
Maybe I am an horrible listener, but I can't put the notes on the right key when the original vocals are shouting. When I go to UTAU add the notes, they don't look to be shouting and actually normal singing on a higher key...and this confuses me XD Could anyone give me hints or then fixing the UST for me?

The Original song:

My version:

I am making the VSQ from scratch in VOCALOID and the talking in CeVio.
 
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