Critique and Feedback Regarding Mixing (audio snippet)

kristian-dee

Momo's Minion
Heyyo~! I'm new here. :3

Anyways, I've been working on an English song cover using Kasane Teto (for main vocals) and Yokune Ruko (for background vocals). It took me a while to write the midi of all the harmonies and parts, but that's beside the point.

I'm just wondering if you guys can critique my mixing. I'm only providing the last few parts of the song (because the chorus and verses aren't exactly polished).