Critique my tuning pls !

[M. Enini]

I was wondering what you guys thought of my tuning and what I should do to improve. I was trying to tune her to sound like she's kind of crying and emotional sounding

 

[GothAmaterasu]

I think it sounds great : o
Does she have end breaths? I think using them would add the emotion you're looking for c:

 

[M. Enini]

I think it sounds great : o
Does she have end breaths? I think using them would add the emotion you're looking for c:

she does ill add some more thanks!!

 

[tavionte]

very nice but i would make the vibrato a bit more shallow in some places.