Design Critique. C:

Iza45

Momo's Minion
Yup.

Shouta's here.

Well, this time I'm very indecise about his design, and I would like some opinions.
Tell me what do you think please. C:

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PurinPuff

Guest
Super cute. I love the vest and bowtie and aah. <3
I'm interested to see his color scheme.

I have a voice sample here to help compare the voice to the design.
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[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/purinpuff/hello-happy-beans-shouta-test[/soundcloud]
 

SugarSweetVenom

Momo's Minion
They don't quite stack right, forgive me if that seemed rude ; w ; . What I mean is the voice sounds bit young for the person you drew, if anything he sounds like he should be a little younger.
 

Iza45

Momo's Minion
Thread starter
Yup, He seems younger in that song, but here? °^^°

[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/user270893564/preview[/soundcloud]
 

SugarSweetVenom

Momo's Minion
Iza45 link said:
Yup, He seems younger in that song, but here? °^^°

[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/user270893564/preview[/soundcloud]
His voice is much more mature here, I'd say it matches up with the design now.