Design Critique? =x=

[Hika421]

OK. It thought I had enough of this on the old forums, but here I am again with design critique. XD

So Hikaru this tiiime. I felt pretty good with Haruki's design, and since then I added to it, but Hikaru, Hmm. XD Like I dunno how I'm feeling with it so I'd value your input. =  =/

--And some derp sketches cause I feel they.... explain better? XD

 

[ChaudChocolat]

The version with the short is pretty good so far. I don't know if a shirt-skirt is a good idea, but it's up to you!

 

[DianaTan]

I like the one with the shorts better~
The second one with the skirt is more crypton-ish and you can see it too often =/
Also the belt (or whatever I should call it) on the right arm fits the one with the shorts better

 

[TheSnowSongstress]

I like it better with the shorts~
It's very nice <3 I love <3

 

[Roxanne]

I love the one with the shorts.
I am a sucker for shorts and shirts like that.

 

[Angel]

The first one is really cute. I think you should go with that.
As well you could take the skirt from design 2 and put it on design 1.

 

[Hika421]

What if I did it soooo that.....

#2's dress thing is like a jacket, and the clothes from #1 are underneath? ' x'

 

[Roxanne]

I dont know... That would remind me too much of Utaune Namine(?)

 

[Zoku]

Dress-thing!

 

[Hentai]

Oh, I like that suggestion. Skirt from design 2, on the outfit of design 1, and I guess you can turn the shorts underneath into that bike/gym shorts thing like Aiko wears so I can never see mai pantsu



Also, you should use the [nobbc][hs width=300 height=300][/hs][/nobbc] thumbnail tags.

 

[Ashioto]

I'm with Hentai :o. I think Design 1 would look nice with the skirt and cycling shorts under the skirt o ^ o...but with or without the skirt I'd still choose Design 1~ xD

 

[Astral-Arts]

I would definatly say your fist one, with the shorts. That's very cute and really appealing. :D