English Cover - "fix"

faerimagic

Ruko's Ruffians
[video=youtube]http://youtu.be/aZKABKk-r7A[/video]

Description:

This was so difficult to sing and mix.
So this is my first decent cover in a long while.
The lyrics were fun to rewrite, it was my microphone that kept on giving me problems. (There was a buzzing I couldn't get rid of without distorting the vocals. It was very frustrating.)
The art was done by me, you can see it here: http://fav.me/d6tosmw
I took so much liberty with the lyrics, but I really did try to retain some of the meaning while simultaneously retaining some of the rhymes and making it singable. (In the end, though, I do feel like my lyrics are a bit unclear and foggy...)

This cover is for descent87's keeno cover contest! More information can be found here: http://descentsubs.wordpress.com/2013/10/02/announcing-the-in-the-rain-keeno-cover-song-contest/

Original Song by keeno: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15416657
Off Vocal by らふどん (Rafudon): http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15430977

Nico Nico Douga Mirror: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22366736
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You are free to use and edit my lyrics for non-commercial use as long as you credit me, thank you!

Every day I felt this way, even if I was alone.
The strangled breaths I had to take seems to fall into a void.
For though we felt the same, we were still so very young
And before we knew how far we were, our tie was soon destroyed.

For a very long time now, I had always loved you so.
But suddenly, the clarity of this bond began to break.
The hand I held before is now nonexistent and cold,
And now the lack of you is causing my lonely heart to ache.

And now, I /have to cry,/ and ask why did tonight have to finally be,
Perhaps you might know, why it has to be so, hey...

For the times that I have tried/ to shred and erase this truth,
The result is still the same, it will always be you.
And I'm breaking down, but you know, that's okay,
And I'm dying now, but you know, that's okay,
I don't know what else to do, but I still love you.

As I feel the wind/ that gently caresses me,
In the back of my mind, I can still hear your soft song.
Breathing slowly, I see the rising blue,
And I hope wherever you are, you might find somewhere you belong
I know what to do, have to say adieu

Even though I may be gone, will my name be in your mind?
I just need to know the truth by the time that I leave you behind.

As I look up into the endless painted/dark sky,
I am terribly lost and I don't know why
Into void,/ I painfully let your name fly.
And I'm breaking down, but you know, that's alright,
And I'm dying now, but you know, that's alright,
Because now, I can come see you

For I still love you.
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Base Translation: http://onsenjikan.dreamwidth.org/58124.html