If cover - seeking critique

kyukon

Momo's Minion
Hi guys, if you could help me out with this, that would be great.
I'm mostly curious on the mixing... do you think my voice is being drowned out?
Are there any other things you think might make the song sound better if it was edited?
Things like that.

Any input is greatly appreciated!


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