きろくけいたいWHISKEYβ Download (feedback and reviews welcome!)

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  1. sailor _ravioli

    sailor _ravioli Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Hi your neighborhood plebian here with a VB download
    (i didnt want to put her in showcase since shes still in the making and therefore incomplete so please dont hit me)

    release song +dls:


    choose your flavor:
    Zip: mega.nz/#!XNdBlTqJ!6z_TlHbt9E…lpNP4HHisBuZsA6qb8yno

    Rar: mega.nz/#!eAlyALDR!040lsaJZVo…45euR5y9nYDDqfT_8_t28

    people who use utau synth please let me know if this vb is compatible on mac!

    btw if you use her dont be afraid to show me what you made!!! 'v' id be glad to see it!

    read the readme below for more info
    Hi! Thank you so much for downloading Keitai's Beta!!

    remember this is a beta bank so theres def going to be some minor flaws

    use these flags or she'll be sad Mt-50Mb10Mo-20ME-5B0
    use either moresampler or fresamp

    Heres some general stuff thats not perfect
    -the character file has some errors* that i cant fix rn TT_TT
    -ra has a frq error to "fix" replace ra's with da's
    -oto is a bit iffy
    -two upper pitches will be added later this month (hopefully)

    if you have any questions or you used her
    and want to show me what you made, feel free to contact me on any of these sites!!

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    *errors are invalid image and some other one i cant remember ill look into 'em later tho

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  3. M. Enini

    M. Enini Teto's Territory Defender of Defoko

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    the bank works on synth !! theres just some oto problems
     
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  4. sailor _ravioli

    sailor _ravioli Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    thanks for letting me know! the oto was a bit rushed i have to admit lol
     
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  5. sailor _ravioli

    sailor _ravioli Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    hey guys! so i sort of decided to bump the thread bc i havent gotten much feedback on your experiences with her vb (if you downloaded her)
    i want to make this vb as easy to use as possible and the only way i can do that is through your feedback!
    your input is very important to me and my road to improving at utau, thanks!
    p.s. sorry if this sounds pushy/butt-ish
    also feel free to make covers with her hhaahahha orz
     
  6. TakeruInudo

    TakeruInudo Ruko's Ruffians Defender of Defoko

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    I will say, I love the tone of the voice. This kind of voice can either go as a mature Fem/Adult voice or you can look at it as a young Male/Teen voice (like 12-13 yrs old). This VB also has a nice amount of natural bass to it which makes it easy on the ears (especialy for people who are sensitive to higher pitched/treble VBs).

    Looking through the oto. you have a lot of Preu & Overlap much much too close together. I do understand that it was rushed but thought I should still point it out. Another note with oto. is that you don't want the Offset to be JUST when the word begins, you want this to be at a minimum of 10MS before the word (30MS Max (this is most the preferred) while things like '- ka' should be more towards 60MS to 100MS before the word. Also when you record be sure you have at least (and I mean at LEAST) 0.5 seconds of silence before the recording, don't cut the recording before or right at the word (trust me on this). While not always 'necessary' it is always a good idea to add the extra words like kye-che-dye & si ect. While again it may not always be necesary it's always good to have those extra recordings so that the VB can be a bit more versatile.

    Other then that you VB does have plenty of potential. Oh & one last tip I can give is when you make a CV bank, with your vowels --a - e - i - o - u-- go on ahead & add you double vowels like --ae - ai - ao - au-- & ect. CV banks can be choppy at times on it's own as it is so having you double vowels will help make it sound just a tad bit smoother.
     
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  7. sailor _ravioli

    sailor _ravioli Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Thanks! Seriously you went so in depth with this and you were specific, which I really appreciate!
     
  8. TakeruInudo

    TakeruInudo Ruko's Ruffians Defender of Defoko

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    No problem lol I know that I myself have a hard time understanding things if it isn't in depth & being super vague definitely doesn't help. Better to be in depth & let the reader decide if they want to take the time to read it then be vague & leave the reader confused :smile:
     
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