Hi there~! Since I won't get any tips from the soundcloud upload only, could you be so kind to help with my mixing? :P (be harsh) I really dislike the reverb, it just sounds so out of place and noisy, I didn't even put too much of it (at least I don't think so), but without it it sounds so..dry. I used FL Studio, the plugins I used are fruity compressor, fruity parametric eq 2, soundgoodizer (I don't even know If it's bad to use it but it's so addicting T_T) and fruit reeverb 2 I think. Aah If you want to critique my tuning err do it, I already know that those sudden stops after the Ns (I don't know how to say it >_> At this point you are probably cringing over any grammar/spelling error, my bad, english is not my mother tongue) are horrible. I used moresampler, the flags I used are Mt,Mb,Mo,MC,ME and MG, vel around 170..and nothing else I think? here it is: Remember: BE HARSH<3 thanks!