Need Feedback and Help with Utau Design

Mooncheese

Momo's Minion
Okay, I've begun designing my Utau. She has too many missing details, (I'm having creativity issues right now) though, so I can't have her drawn or released just yet...
I made a document with all I have so far. If anyone wants to help fill in parts of it, I'd appreciate it. But I'm not allowing outright editing of the document (someone might graffiti the place), so leave comments (or suggestions, apparently) as inspiration.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15AJtYVew9Zpf0qbZrQ_EHfc0mCux2EawfV5j5xC9hUE/edit?usp=sharing
Something to note: I made this document on a Linux...
 

Xepheris

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko
Okay, I've begun designing my Utau. She has too many missing details, (I'm having creativity issues right now) though, so I can't have her drawn or released just yet...
I made a document with all I have so far. If anyone wants to help fill in parts of it, I'd appreciate it. But I'm not allowing outright editing of the document (someone might graffiti the place), so leave comments (or suggestions, apparently) as inspiration.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15AJtYVew9Zpf0qbZrQ_EHfc0mCux2EawfV5j5xC9hUE/edit?usp=sharing
Something to note: I made this document on a Linux...

I recommended some things ^^~ Over all I like her short concept! :sing:
 

Mooncheese

Momo's Minion
Thread starter
Thanks Xepheris.

I added, and today edited her character story. Earlier today it was a hot mess... It's much better now. So please, feel free to look and comment, everyone. It's the same link as in the OP.