Need help on designing again

[Skiyoshi 十三]

Hello UF! I'd like for your input on what kind of person(A female) you see when you hear my UTAUs voice. I'm currently not happy with the design I made for her now, so I need some new ideas. Here's a small excerpt. Sorry it is so short, haha. Orz



Also, could you possibly critique it? (Voice, mix, the works.) I won't be offended, I just want to improve. And she is a multi-pitch, so if you notice the pitches being "jumpy", please tell me so I can re-do the samples.

 

[Kitcat190]

I picture a college student(or around that age) that everyone kind of wants to hang around. o 3 o Like maybe with relaxed clothes and an up kind of hair style. But I'm just a bit weird T 7 T
As for the voice, the oto's seem pretty good, maybe a touch up on some consonants. Try experimenting with different resamplers to get the best sound out her. She's has a slight softness to her so maybe since she's multi pitch try and bring out a more stronger tone?
Over all I like her voice, it might help to build her around a concept to find a good design T 7 T

 

[Skiyoshi 十三]

I picture a college student(or around that age) that everyone kind of wants to hang around. o 3 o Like maybe with relaxed clothes and an up kind of hair style. But I'm just a bit weird T 7 T
As for the voice, the oto's seem pretty good, maybe a touch up on some consonants. Try experimenting with different resamplers to get the best sound out her. She's has a slight softness to her so maybe since she's multi pitch try and bring out a more stronger tone?
Over all I like her voice, it might help to build her around a concept to find a good design T 7 T

Thank you for the input! By stronger tone do you mean a more powerful voice? I did feel her high notes was kind of weak, especially when she says the "ka" part in "Sekai de".

 

[Kitcat190]

Thank you for the input! By stronger tone do you mean a more powerful voice? I did feel her high notes was kind of weak, especially when she says the "ka" part in "Sekai de".

Ah yes, T 7 T

 

[stormylullaby]

Definitely picture someone older, late teens/early 20s. Maybe caramel skin & white shoulder length hair with blue eyes but that's a little specific.

She's got a nice voice but I don't think she does this song justice, her high notes do sound a bit weak. The OTO sounds like it could use slight tweaking but otherwise it's fine, you did a good job~