Pitchbend critique?

mangosiryan12

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko
good day to all XD

i'm posting this here cuz i'm not sure of my edit. does this sound right? and also, can you give me any advice on pitchbending?

ust by pandalolii

https://soundcloud.com/siryan-1/wip2-interviewer-pitchbend