Pitchblending critique??

[Ryuuoh DeltaPlus]

(I'm not really sure if this is in the correct forum. If it isn't, I do sincerely apologize).

So lately, I tried pitchblending the usts I have. I'm really a beginner when it comes to this. I really had a hard time deciding if the pitch sounds OK or not.

Anyways, I want to know your opinion guyz about my edit, since I want to improve on my UTAU skillz.

Here's the short cover using the original unedited ust:

[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/lolit-badelles/utau-test-shotgun-lovers[/soundcloud]

And this is the one I pitchblended:
[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/gatxx03/my-attempt-at-pitchblending[/soundcloud]

I would really appreciate your comments and suggestions guyz.

Thanks in advance!!~

 

[C Bear]

Sounds pretty good to me, though I have never heard this song. But from what I can tell, it sounds okay.

If you have a pretty good ear when it comes to notes and key, you can put it with the music and listen to it then. You may notice something wrong with the pitchbends when its put next to the music.

 

[Austria]

*pitchbend :3

I don't really like that vibrato on the first few ra ra ra's but the rest sounds ok.
I tuned this song once and it didn't go well at all
haha

Spoiler

mixing is real bad on this one....my mixing sucks lol
[video=youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2ExOaHfItk[/video]

 

[Miramiee]

It sounds very...light? I dunno how to put it. It sounds good(for a beginner) but more it's good to practice more to get better. And by "light" I mean like...there aren't(for me to hear anyways) super obvious changes.

As for the vibrato: I think it's a bit too fast in some parts. Like...it "vibrates" instead of "skips" asdgbhjn waah I dunno how to put it. It's good to observe and listen to utau users who use vibrato really well(they know who they are). I know you can't see what they did, but you can get your ear accustomed to what the vibrato sound like.

Overall, like I said, it's pretty good for a beginner. Listen to how other people do it and since there are like barely any IF any pitchbending tutorials, you have to teach yourself. Well...yeah. :D