Sakura Drops UST Critique?

stormylullaby

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This is a UST I've been working on for Sakura Drops by Utada Hikaru. I've been working on it on-&-off for about EVER now, & I haven't got too far, but this is what I have. Anything at all is helpful owo

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/stormylullaby/sakura-drops-ust-preview[/soundcloud]
 

stormylullaby

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Bumping this, because I'd really like a response or something D: & also because I fixed it up a bit, so here's the newest preview~

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/stormylullaby/sakura-drops-ust-preview-2[/soundcloud]
 

Yue Nagareboshi

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I think it sounds ok.... I am not pretty sure if it's offtime since I don't have the instrumental playing, but I don't think that is happening.

On the other side,  I am glad you changed the vocals... Ritsu SHARP, even if it's a good voicebank, do not fit at all to this song. I think you changed it for Linako, right? sounds more natural and less "forced".