Thoughts on New Design?

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  1. Arissa

    Arissa Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Hello, everyone~ So I made this design a while back and was considering using it for Tsugumi's new voicebank~! So I figured this forum could provide some good feedback on it ^^(Haven't decided on what to create for her shoes but I have decided on showing her bare legs ;3)

    Was also thinking this could be used for an alternate design since I won't be getting rid of her original :smile:

    So, what do you guys think?

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  3. Cocoa

    Cocoa Teto's Territory

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    From what I’m pretty sure your UTAU sounds like via YouTube search results, it’s extremely fitting! The design looks innocent and airy, just like the voice. It’s a really nice drawing! It looks fitting for a sweet append, imo.
     
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  4. Arissa

    Arissa Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Ah, thank you!! ^^ I'm glad you like it(and yeah, I have thought about using it for her quiet/sweet voicebanks, but I figured using the design for her upcoming vb wouldn't hurt ^^)
     
  5. Truly

    Truly Teto's Territory Defender of Defoko

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    design looks alright, but I would recommend adding a background or slightly blending out the hard edges (mainly on her hair), and rotating the eyes until they're on the same arc (right now they're slightly tilted in a way that makes her look wall-eyed, but I think if they matched more closely it'd be fine.)

    DM if I explained poorly and you want to know.
     
  6. Arissa

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    The art is in no way finalized or finished lol, but thanks for the critique ig(still kinda confused tho ;^^)

    And I was looking more for thoughts on the actual design ;^^
     
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    RaccoonButler Founder of The Church of Mawarine Shuu Defender of Defoko

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    I think she looks very cute, the colors are nice together, and I like her hair and the pearl earrings.

    If anything, maybe there could stand to be some sort pf trim that matches the darker colors on the chest/choker area (like maybe around the waist or edge of the skirt/on the straps, someplace like that-)

    For the shoes I would think maybe slippers of some sort could fit.

    Gj !
     
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  8. Arissa

    Arissa Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Thank you!! <3

    And what do you mean by "pf trim?"
     
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    RaccoonButler Founder of The Church of Mawarine Shuu Defender of Defoko

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    Oh whoops, that was supposed to be "of trim," my bad !
     
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  10. Arissa

    Arissa Ritsu's Renegades Defender of Defoko

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    Ohh, it's fine (I should've gotten that lol)

    Thanks for you feedback! ^^ I'll consider some darker colors to add
     

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