Tuning critique? (visual sample)

[kimchi-tan]

It's less than a minute long and it starts at the 4th second.

I got addicted to this song and of course had to make a cover of this song along with my 25+ other projects.

I haven't manifested most of my tuning in my other covers because most of them had already tuned usts/little tuning needed used in them OTL So here's one with the first part of the song fully tuned by me!

The screen capturer that I used didn't record the audio so I had to sync it after mixing a bit in FL Studio (no instrumental, though).

UST belongs to nmasao1.

[video=youtube]http://youtu.be/nfWPfZaeG4A[/video]

 

[UroborosCrow]

I think the tuning is beautiful, but for some reason she seems slightly off tune? I'm sorry I can't offer any advice on how to fix it apart from suggesting a pitch correction tool because I'd rather keep all those great pitchbends (I think you can afford to remove some though near the beginning).

 

[meichan]

make sure all of your pitchbends end on a place that is in the key you are working with

 

[mangosiryan12]

what meichan said. its a good start though, Good job!