Critique Requested 【UTAUカバー】 Isolation 【Makoto Rina】+old cover!!

ARIA

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko

Uh so yeaH once july comes around my old cover will be 4 years old... not sure how I feel about that lol...


Old cover:

I really hope there is some improvement in mixing and voicebank quality.... hh please tell me what you guys think!!
 

kyakyakyu

Teto's Territory
ohhhhHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT VOICEBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK'S VOICE IS SO DOPE OH MY GOD QAQ her scream in the new cover makes me scream too-

there is a very huge improvement in mixing and voicebank quality!!! the pronunciation of the newest vb definitely sounds more japanese. i also love the softneeeeeeeess and the power during the first parts of the chorus uwu she sounds rly mature compared to the older vb too :o

however, i think there is a slight timing miss at the beginning? i also think when recording you do not open your mouth as big as the older vb, so she sounds muffled and soft. compared with other UTAUs that i use, the vb fits more as rina's soft append instead of a voicebank update. after the second chorus, too, she sounds really soft, but it makes me unable to hear what she sings clearly. setting up a multipitch/core+append vcv vb will make her sound rly good and stable i think owo

pleasedotakethiswithagrainofsaltbci'mstilllearninghowtouseutautoo

i really love the cover though, and it makes me want to save her voicebank in my UTAU library! may i have the link to the vb download link, if she can be publicly used?
 
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ARIA

Ritsu's Renegades
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ohhhhHHHHHHHHHHHH THAT VOICEBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK'S VOICE IS SO DOPE OH MY GOD QAQ her scream in the new cover makes me scream too-

there is a very huge improvement in mixing and voicebank quality!!! the pronunciation of the newest vb definitely sounds more japanese. i also love the softneeeeeeeess and the power during the first parts of the chorus uwu she sounds rly mature compared to the older vb too :o

however, i think there is a slight timing miss at the beginning? i also think when recording you do not open your mouth as big as the older vb, so she sounds muffled and soft. compared with other UTAU that i use, the vb fits more as rina's soft append instead of a voicebank update. after the second chorus, too, she sounds really soft, but it makes me unable to hear what she sings clearly. setting up a multipitch/core+append vcv vb will make her sound rly good and stable i think owo

pleasedotakethiswithagrainofsaltbci'mstilllearninghowtouseutautoo

i really love the cover though, and it makes me want to save her voicebank in my UTAU library! may i have the link to the vb download link, if she can be publicly used?
aaaa well Im glad you think so!!
And not fully sure about the timing? Not sure if I hear it or not ^^; And not honestly sure if I did or not, I mean I'm still new to making VCVs (the earlier vbs of mine are all CV) I only have one other VCV bank that failed really badly. And for the unable to understand the lyrics of what shes singing, if its echoy part its kinda meant to be like that, if its the higher parts, its cause she is monopitched and has a hard time reaching some of those notes ^^; I also heavily edited flags within the song as well, so that may have some parts to it if that makes any sense ^^:

And aaa I'd be glad to share her vb!
A download to her bank is on the release video I did for her here!:
Eventually I hope to make a multipitch, I am just super self conscious when recording and since everyone is home now due to lockdowns and such I dont want to record while people are home ;;;;

But thank you so much!!