Critique Requested [UTAU] Machine Gun [Akemi Kotomi]

ARIA

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko

Probably not the best cover around but I really enjoyed covering this!! I love this song and I also enjoyed drawing the art on the side! (I referenced though ;-; )
Hope you guys like it though!!
Feel free to insert your thoughts, just nothing really rude please ;-;
 

Avalia-Kasa

probably a potato tbh
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sounds pretty good! i usually use "e" when i use an english word with "ih" with a japanese bank, i think it'd make it sound a lil more fluent
also you could play with envelopes to make the vowel shorter! instead of "shouldu" you could make the envelope stop at the consonant :3
 
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Ritsu's Renegades
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sounds pretty good! i usually use "e" when i use an english word with "ih" with a japanese bank, i think it'd make it sound a lil more fluent
also you could play with envelopes to make the vowel shorter! instead of "shouldu" you could make the envelope stop at the consonant :3
Thank you for the tips!! I appreciate it! Ill try that the next time then :smile:
 
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