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  1. Wen Yu
    Wen Yu
    i put it into google translate but i don't really understand it so i guess its really poetic or symbolic so I'm wondering if anyone can analyze anything from it. seems interesting.
    Jun 11, 2018
  2. Haichou
    Haichou
    I tried to translate it, but my grammar skills are bad, so what I ended up with didn't make sense. I gave up at 冷めんでくつま先 ("toes are getting cold??" no idea what that means). The lyrics seem... regretful, almost? Sorry I can't help much more than that ^^; it sounds like an interesting song draft
    Jun 11, 2018
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  3. MillyAqualine
    MillyAqualine
    It tinted in red Just changed my mind The sight of that silhouetto disappears at that painful singing Before it'd cool down I fixed my mistake Gently admiring this fascinating/elegant smile ? 'm not sure but it'd be likely around those lines
    Jun 11, 2018
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  4. MillyAqualine
    MillyAqualine
    It seems to be about a love story with reminescence of the loved one ? But the silhouetto vanishing while the person is singing painfully, the red tint (blood ? ) and the cool down thing suggest distance or something even sadder ? Iunno to be honest, but here is how I felt it while translating (thanks jisho)
    Jun 11, 2018
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  5. Wen Yu
    Wen Yu
    thanks both of you!! that makes a lil more sense now. interesting. now i REALLY wish this was a longer song now lol. google translate also gave me "toes are getting cold" as well and i kinda chuckled lmao
    Jun 11, 2018
  6. Kumoito
    Kumoito
    My red, ripened heart
    ends up withering.
    The shadow singing earnestly,
    my thoughts are disappearing.
    My toes are turning cold
    Correcting my mistakes
    While holding onto
    This elegant smile.
    (Note: 赤く色付いた in the first line is usually used to describes fruits turning red as they become ripe)
    From sm22599187 right? I also wish it was longer, it sounds really nice and the lyrics are intriguing.
    Jun 12, 2018
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  7. Wen Yu
    Wen Yu
    wHOA YOUVE HEARD IT TOO? i almost didn't think i'd find someone who also heard it. wish it was a full song,its beautiful. the style of the song is kinda similar to like some okame-p and yuyoyuppe songs imo so i rlly like it. wish i wrote songs like that lol. thanks for the translation haha
    Jun 12, 2018
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  8. Kumoito
    Kumoito
    I recently found out about this producer when they uploaded an UTAU original (sm33025318) They seem to be back from a long hiatus so I hope they’ll keep posting songs! (Btw my exams are ending soon so I’ll have time to translate more stuff from them if you want. Just let me know which songs!)
    Jun 13, 2018
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