critique my engrish tuning skills, please :3

Miawerz

Ruko's Ruffians
Defender of Defoko

so what do you think? Is it at least passable lol xD (I'm still a noob)
I somehow cheated tho cuz I recorded extra samples like rolling r's and l's but still in vcv format
hoping that anyone would give me tips on tuning and making engrish smoother(?)