CRITIQUE REQUESTED - 【UTAU original】SNAP【TYPE A】

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I'm definitely no composer.

I created this song a few days ago, and have been /trying/ to draw even one decent image for a video. (I've been failing, as I'm sure you can tell, since there's no art lmao)

Please listen to my song. I consider it finished and something I'd be satisfied to release, but I know there's room for improvement. Please take a listen and be as blunt (and explanatory, since I don't know music theory at all) as possible - you won't hurt my feelings, and I need to learn. Thank you!!

 

Sors

Local Guppie & UTAU Korean Advocate
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Defender of Defoko
Now for someone who doesn't know music theory at all, I have to say...

This is pretty cool man!
 
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Wolfe Nebula

Ruko's Ruffians
Defender of Defoko
Now this is already an amazing song, one thing that could improve it is after the first chorus, the part beginning with "All I've ever felt for you", if you add a new instrument to the mix, like maybe a heavy drum beat or eerie piano, this should help the song flow a bit more into the next part. this song niiiice though :uhuhu: