Is this colouring style cool?

[Mougeki Mero]

Hello! Today I traced over (it was only training, calm down) a picture, and coloured it my own way (my owen colors too btw), added my own shading and etc. I just didnt made an outline, cause...I forgot I shouldve done it first :P

Anyway, I'd like to know if this colouring style looks cool?

 

[Melomad]

The colors are well choosed !
If you are going for a more "realistic" look, maybe should try adding warmer colors to the really shadowy parts like the neck. Also highlights would be great on the nose and the eyes.

 

[Piia]

I think it's great~! :D
It looks like an MMD model if you were to ask me ^-^

 

[Soursop the fruit]

Ooooh, a color-shading style!~ That's cool! I'm used to this style of coloring and yours is nice! Especially her eye
I'm not a pro yet, but...may i give some advice for you?

-You can add darker skin shade between her two eyes(It's a half-image now, but it's ok) and her cheek bone area to make her look more realistic
- You can blur some pinkish red color to create blush on her cheek
- And a little but smooth highlights on her forehead, cheek and chin! It will make the drawing nicer
- Be adventurous with colors, color-shading is fun when it comes to color picking. Don't be afraid to pick vivid or dark color....When i was on the beginning of color shading, i tend to use soft-light palletes until my mom told me to be brave with colors. And you know, the drawing turned more lively!

I'm sory if i said something wrong! I hope these may help you

 

[Mougeki Mero]

The colors are well choosed !
If you are going for a more "realistic" look, maybe should try adding warmer colors to the really shadowy parts like the neck. Also highlights would be great on the nose and the eyes.

Thank you!!! I will remember this ><

I think it's great~! :D
It looks like an MMD model if you were to ask me ^-^

Ooh, thanks! It was actually an MMD model of Yandere-chan from Yandere Simulator. I was trying to make a better eye-shape and overall better (?) colouring for her ><

Ooooh, a color-shading style!~ That's cool! I'm used to this style of coloring and yours is nice! Especially her eye
I'm not a pro yet, but...may i give some advice for you?

-You can add darker skin shade between her two eyes(It's a half-image now, but it's ok) and her cheek bone area to make her look more realistic
- You can blur some pinkish red color to create blush on her cheek
- And a little but smooth highlights on her forehead, cheek and chin! It will make the drawing nicer
- Be adventurous with colors, color-shading is fun when it comes to color picking. Don't be afraid to pick vivid or dark color....When i was on the beginning of color shading, i tend to use soft-light palletes until my mom told me to be brave with colors. And you know, the drawing turned more lively!

I'm sory if i said something wrong! I hope these may help you

Thanks! Advice is always welcomed
-Actually, now that I read the first and 2nd ones I remembered some 3D model textures that use a similar thing! I will surely use it on my next try :3
-Oh, I was unsure about highlights, I will definitely try them on the same pic and post here!
-And I will surely try the more lively colours, another thing I was afaraid of trying XDDD

 

[Soursop the fruit]

Thanks! Advice is always welcomed
-Actually, now that I read the first and 2nd ones I remembered some 3D model textures that use a similar thing! I will surely use it on my next try :3
-Oh, I was unsure about highlights, I will definitely try them on the same pic and post here!
-And I will surely try the more lively colours, another thing I was afaraid of trying XDDD

Aaaaaa~ Thank youuu
Good luck with your next try!