Thoughts on Hikaru's Design?

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Hiiii everyone!!!! A while ago I posted Hitomi!! I finally finished Hikaru's design! Hikaru is Hitomi's best friend :D I wanted to know what you guys think!
My art hasn't been doing well lately but I'm still pretty proud! ^^ Main Outfit
Alternate outfit

 

[viiridiian]

it's really neat!!! love it,, especially the alternative one

 

[Baphobloody Goat Dream]

I'm a sucker for bangs covering one eye www. I like the alternative outfit a lot, though I do (for that reason) find myself liking the first one's hair more. It's a cool design either way!

 

[FuranZombie]

both designs are amazing... I liked the main outfit's hair... and the outfit in general of the alternate one....