Critique Requested [UTAU NEWCOMER] GAME OVER [Katsu Hibiki CV]

[ARIA]

Yay a new bank of mine! Anyone you know that does oto commissions that are really good ?
Also what type of design do you think she should have?

Also what do you think of her so far?

 

[CometStre]

I quite like her how clear and powerful she is! For a design, maybe try to incorporate louder/brighter colors and more of an adult look?

If you'd like someone to look over her oto's, I do offer oto commissions! Feel free to take a look! (https://www.deviantart.com/stre-chan/journal/OTO-INI-Commissions-758111968) I can usually get CV banks back to people in about 30 minutes.

 

[Avalia-Kasa]

she has such a good tone slaaaayyyyyy

i actually disagree w/ stre i think muted warm colors would work but i def agree with the more adult look!