Will someone fix my oto's for me?

[Emolga]

Oi, I just created my first Utau. I'm new to the otoing deal, I sort of understand the basics, but I was hoping if someone could fix them up for me. I'm not sure if the recordings are bad or if it's my oto's. ;_;
The bank can be found here: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?jz3yksr2l7eeiak
The password is dinosaur

Here's an example from a ust I'm working on:
[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/paperkirby/donna-oto-needs-help-version[/soundcloud]

I used resampler, haven't tried tips yet. But if someone were to help me, I would definately help and find a way to repay you! *A*
I can do art (Though my art isn't great)
I can do a cover using your utau (I tend to be better at mixing)
Or I can 'TRY' and make a ust (I can't promise how good it'd come out ;n
Here's a few art samples

Spoiler

I can try a different style if you'd like

Either way, thank you for the consideration! ovo/!

 

[Cdra]

This isn't the right forum for requests and trades.  I'm moving your thread to the requests section, hopefully someone can help you there.

 

[lunavi]

I'm still kind of a novice at configuring oto.inis, but I went ahead and took a run at tweaking yours. It might need a bit a bit more tweaking, but I did my best.

I'll PM you with the MediaFire link and password.

Hope this helped.