Year 3 Class C-14 Kubozono Chiyoko’s Joining of the Cabinet UST Critique Please

AoiAndroid

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I finally figured out how to make a UST! I just recently listed to Shiina Mota's/PowaPowa-P's song Year 3 Class C-14 Kubozono Chiyoko's Joining of the Cabinet and since I couldn't find a UST, I decided to make my own!

I know it's not as good as it could be, seeing how this is literally my first UST ever made, so could someone take a look at it and critique it for any errors or ways to improve?

Here is the link right [here], if you make a cover to test it and post it somewhere please credit either aoiandroid/drawey10girl