This Poem Is The Sequel To My First Poem, The Evil.
From The View Of Denki Utadenwa
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The knife had penetrated, but no blood shed
No matter how many times I cut the flesh, it did not effect me
This was why I was in hell
I had eternal life
I looked down at her carcass
The sour scent bleached the already distasteful air
Eternal life I didn't ask for
Nothing could kill me
Nothing could possibly relieve me of this life
Not even the strongest of forces
Back in my hidden away room
I tried everything
I filled the room with deadly gas
Yet I could breathe
I slit my wrists
Yet they did not bleed
I hung myself with a dirty rope
Yet my neck did not crush
"Someone please take my life... I beg..."
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Please leave your thoughts about it, and if i should do a squel to this as well
From The View Of Denki Utadenwa
~ ~ ~ ~
The knife had penetrated, but no blood shed
No matter how many times I cut the flesh, it did not effect me
This was why I was in hell
I had eternal life
I looked down at her carcass
The sour scent bleached the already distasteful air
Eternal life I didn't ask for
Nothing could kill me
Nothing could possibly relieve me of this life
Not even the strongest of forces
Back in my hidden away room
I tried everything
I filled the room with deadly gas
Yet I could breathe
I slit my wrists
Yet they did not bleed
I hung myself with a dirty rope
Yet my neck did not crush
"Someone please take my life... I beg..."
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Please leave your thoughts about it, and if i should do a squel to this as well