ザ 死んだ | The Dead | Za Shinda

Kitsuyeo

Teto's Territory
This Poem Is The Sequel To My First Poem, The Evil.

From The View Of Denki Utadenwa



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The knife had penetrated, but no blood shed
No matter how many times I cut the flesh, it did not effect me

This was why I was in hell
I had eternal life

I looked down at her carcass
The sour scent bleached the already distasteful air

Eternal life I didn't ask for
Nothing could kill me

Nothing could possibly relieve me of this life
Not even the strongest of forces



Back in my hidden away room
I tried everything

I filled the room with deadly gas
Yet I could breathe

I slit my wrists
Yet they did not bleed

I hung myself with a dirty rope
Yet my neck did not crush

"Someone please take my life... I beg..."



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Please leave your thoughts about it, and if i should do a squel to this as well
 

The_Fish_God

Teto's Territory
Supporter
woah, very intense and deep, and depressing XD

This is really good, I like it! The end gets really deep where it says

I tried everything

I filled the room with deadly gas
Yet I could breathe

I slit my wrists
Yet they did not bleed

I hung myself with a dirty rope
Yet my neck did not crush