Critique Requested does anyone know if this concept would fit senbonzakura??

kami

Momo's Minion
So yeah, i dont know jackshit about the Meiji restoration and i wanted to make a cover of Ado's version but with Gakupo. It's basically about a soldier/warrior that survived the battles and dangers of the whole restoration, finally getting to come back home and see his dear partner, after a heartfelt reunion, he starts telling his wife about all the things and battles he went through and happened during the restoration, how everything went down, ICBM yada yada.

I have this almost finished but i don't want to be offensive to anyone nor being historically inacuratte