Can someone help me figure out what's wrong with my Utau?

[Emberlyyn]

this is my first real Utau, but she isn't sounding all that great, and i have no idea why. i need some help figuring if i have to re-record everything and such. :o
Will you help me please for arts? :O
sample:
http://soundcloud.com/ashley-shayy/kocchimuitebabyuntouched
Arts:http://midori-daisuki.deviantart.com/
i just can't do digital right now..i lost my tabby.

 

[Asuka]

Well, you could first provide us with some details or maybe a video or voice sample (this would help us figure out the problem easier) then we'll see what we can do.

And this should go to the Help and Advice section > http://utaforum.net/index.php?board=22.0

 

[Emberlyyn]

Actually, i asked it here because i'm really asking for someone to help me oto and such in exchange for art. ^^;
Forgot to say that...
anywho..here is a sample.
http://soundcloud.com/ashley-shayy/kocchimuitebabyuntouched

 

[Asuka]

I wouldn't say it's the samples / voice itself that sounds bad, but it looks like your Voicebank could do some oto-ing.
Perhaps someone will be able to help out. I'm not the best at oto-ing so I'm afraid I can't help you myself =A=

But Yue made a post about how to oto yourself; it doesn't take too long if you understand the material > http://yue-notebook.tumblr.com/post/22835038023/heroofbagels-it-came-to-my-attention-that-new

Good luck!

 

[Emberlyyn]

Thanks! because i really didn't want to re-record anything that i didn't have too. :T
That wouldve have sucked.
i'll try my best at otoing! thanks!