Looking for design feedback

[JamFlavored]

Reworking the thread. I scrapped Akira for later. Will be remade as a male. ;D

Let's throw Navia up here and see what ya'll think, ya?

Soooo, I need to find a way to work in a microphone/headset me thinks. :x I wanted to mount it on her collar/ring. Or have it so the backside (the inside of the ring) has audio pick up in the front. o-o

 

[TheEternalChild7]

Re: Akira Design help?

Hm. I like it. :3 Very original! Is the shawl-type-thing going to have a color, too, or is it just completely clear?
Also... I don't really know what to make of the skirt. :/ On one hand, it's definitely original and futuristic-looking. But... I don't know. It just seems a little... jarring, to me? I feel like the straight-cut rectangular sections don't really fit in with the rest of her outfit, since her outfit has a lot more curves than straight lines. That's just my opinion, though. ':3 Maybe I'm just looking too hard.

 

[JamFlavored]

Re: Design Help & More

Thanks, Eternal.

I actually think I might scrap her all together and do another design. :x

However, I did update with a base for ya'll to use if you're so inclined or want something easy to throw designs over.