Manry Mixing Critique?

[stormylullaby]

So, I don't usually ask for mixing critiques but I really need this one. I'm doing a duet with Kaen Shujoteki & Rai Akegata, & I really wanna know what I can improve on in this project. Kaen is singing the main & Rai is singing the harmony.
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/stormylullaby/preview/s-bjbHX[/soundcloud]

 

[KiaishiNoKure]

Well, although I am still new into mixing myself,
I like the timing and the mixing of the Harmony and the main.
You did a great job on this (Cause I mostly do everything without harmonies)
It also sounds reall fluent and not too loud.
Although, you could have made the music a tiiiiiny bit quiter, 'cause
this wasy the UTAU can be heard better.

Greetings,
Kiaishi

(P.S Love your signature, I can identify myself with that words )

 

[stormylullaby]

Ahh thank you so much! :3
Truth be told, after this was posted & got no replies for a few hours, I deleted the project & completely restarted mixing it again, but your input is very much appreciated since it's nowhere near the quality I want it to be. /perfectionist

 

[KiaishiNoKure]

Hehe, I understand you well, I also try to improve both, my UTAUs and my mixing ^^
As some people say, you can always get better. But well, I will need some help on my way to perfectionism ouo

I am glad you appriciate my critique and Oh! Not to forget: The UTAU you used has a really wonderful tone to his voice ouo