Mixing Critique

[automatique]

http://www.box.com/s/8qpywo4n6g9fuotyge0y
THIS IS A WIP
Take this on consideration:
* The Echoey parts are on construction.
* The NA- TOOOOOH Part could be changed.
I just want to know how the levels and the overall voice is against the off vocal.

 

[Halo]

Firstly, wrong forum section. I've gone ahead and moved it.

Secondly, they both need a better EQ... And compression, actually. But mostly EQ. The consonants are just gone. Poof. Nothing.

Her treble could stand to be boosted, too... I'd personally use FIREGAIN somewhat for this purpose, adjusting the high gain into the + values slightly.

Back to the EQ, there's not much more I can suggest other than perhaps making sure the right end is pretty high, and the left is lower, closer to or slightly below default levels. Play with it.

 

[automatique]

Firstly, wrong forum section. I've gone ahead and moved it.

Secondly, they both need a better EQ... And compression, actually. But mostly EQ. The consonants are just gone. Poof. Nothing.

Her treble could stand to be boosted, too... I'd personally use FIREGAIN somewhat for this purpose, adjusting the high gain into the + values slightly.

Back to the EQ, there's not much more I can suggest other than perhaps making sure the right end is pretty high, and the left is lower, closer to or slightly below default levels. Play with it.

Thanks... here the results of the critique, of kind of...
https://www.box.com/s/myvxzcgl46y2ukum29d3

Also Q:
1st WiP: https://www.box.com/s/48bmashlop38ubry39tk
Last Version: https://www.box.com/s/h5kb5s5s5yvdbyd0u7d0

 

[Halo]

Okay, on Never, now the consonants are mostly hearable, a little sharp even-- I suspect the remaining that cannot be heard are issues in your oto.

That aside, you now need to also raise the mid-right levels a little in the EQ (not in FIREGAIN though), as it's getting a little too tinny now.

Q is the same, but overall sounds a lot better! You might wanna work on your use of Compressors, and perhaps the oto... I don't know what it's doing, but something's up with your consonants.

 

[automatique]

Okay, on Never, now the consonants are mostly hearable, a little sharp even-- I suspect the remaining that cannot be heard are issues in your oto.

That aside, you now need to also raise the mid-right levels a little in the EQ (not in FIREGAIN though), as it's getting a little too tinny now.

Q is the same, but overall sounds a lot better! You might wanna work on your use of Compressors, and perhaps the oto... I don't know what it's doing, but something's up with your consonants.

Maybe it's the oto, in Q it eats the consonants, so maybe, I don't know what happens because well, in other songs she's very clear even If I didn't mix it correctly.