Need Some Mixing Critique...

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Ruko's Ruffians
Defender of Defoko
[soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/sonictheunknown/cyber-thunder-cider-kumone[/soundcloud]

This has easily been the hardest thing I've tried to mix. The timing doesn't sound right and I don't know if I like the effects. I've been working on it on and off for the past week or so but I'm still not completely happy with it.

So please, give me any critique you can think of, or even tips on how to get the timing right on the darn thing (I even tried to line it up with the original version, but THAT'S even proving difficult for me).

So yeah, anything is welcome and appreciated.