Opinion about this design?

[AlphaUtau]

Well, I need a little bit help here. First of all: I'm not a very great artist xD

I wanted to make a 'space-themed' utauloid without copying Galaco, I finished her first art some time ago, but it isn't her boxart, so the pose sucks and the coloring too.

Some things about her design:
- Her name is 'Akatsuki' (=Japanese for dawn) I tried to give her the colors of the sky by a very early sunset (blue, purple, pink,...), her first name is 'Rira' which is pronounced as 'Lilia' (=Dutch for Lilac)
- The ribbon's on her headphone can react on sunlight
- Her shoes are supposed to glow
- I don't know if I can say something more xD

Here's her design (yeshhh, I'm a very bad artist >.<):
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/329/e/f/design_rira_akatsuki_by_0xalphax0-d5m4q26.png

Has anyone advice? owo

 

[SakisCookie]

Ooooh. I really love it! That hair oh god so entrancing

I like the soft pastel color scheme. It's pretty and calming. She looks pretty futuristic, too. I really liiiike. >u<b

 

[Ryuuoh DeltaPlus]

I gotta say, I like her design!

That hair looks so galactic :D

If you don't mind, can I make a lineart of her? I'm still not good at coloring, so making lineart's the best I can do.

 

[AlphaUtau]

Ahh thank you so much both! QAQ

@Ryuuoh DeltaPlus ofcourse I wouldn't mind, actually I would love that owo

 

[Ryuuoh DeltaPlus]

Here's my art of Rira Akatsuki.

Pardon me if I made her a bit, well, a bit sexy.. aheheheh
(blame it on my habit of drawing bishoujo)

Anyways, I hope you like it!

 

[AlphaUtau]

Just as I said on Deviantart: How can I dislike? It looks waaay too amazing! QAQ