Original Song Critique?

[PKLpikachu]

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/pklpikachu/vios-lullaby[/soundcloud]

How does it sound so far?

 

[Shine]

For me, it really sounds like a quite original Christmas Song o.o And that's not bad xD Thats good! Try creating lyrics and adding them to the melody. If you play any instrument or something, yoy also may have more facility in creating an instrumental (If it's a Christmas song, dont forget the bells. XD).
I like it!