Remixing My First Original Song (I need help and pointers on what's missing etc.

[HakumeiH]

This is the original song. My first one +Bound-. Made about 8 months ago.

【UTAU ORIGINAL】+Bound-【Hakumei Hahen】

How the New one is sounding. Started last weekend.

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/hakumeihahen/bound-remix-w-i-p[/soundcloud]

Please help D: I feel as if I'm missing things.

 

[aki4k1]

This really reminds me a bit of Linkin Park. Personally I think that it's fine as is. Maybe you could do some effects with the vocals when you add those in (like some stuttering and stuff like that).

 

[HakumeiH]

This really reminds me a bit of Linkin Park. Personally I think that it's fine as is. Maybe you could do some effects with the vocals when you add those in (like some stuttering and stuff like that).

Alright, thank you :3.