Ugly doodle

Discussion in 'Art & Graphics' started by Tenmei, Nov 22, 2018.

  1. Tenmei

    Tenmei Momo's Minion

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    Here's a pic of my utau Tenmei made in something like 10 minutes. This is the first time I draw him, so if he look too much like something that already exist, tell me and I'll change him.
    ( I know there are problems with proportion )
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    https://sta.sh/09m5y2fh48d
     
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  3. Dangosan

    Dangosan Jerboa angel of Light Defender of Defoko

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    His collar should be thinner (problem with proportions, I know).
    Also, I have this idea that the button line and the piping on the collar are shaped like lightning. Minor modifications like that put life in an otherwise Crypton-esque design.
    I'd suggest adjusting the colors, also. The current colors on the shirt remind me of Teto.
     
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  4. Tenmei

    Tenmei Momo's Minion

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    Thank you a lot for your opinion :smile:
     

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