it sounds good! for critique i think she sounds a little bit muffled; next mix try boosting the high end of the EQ a little more to get the consonants come out a little more, i think it'll help a lot!
it sounds good! for critique i think she sounds a little bit muffled; next mix try boosting the high end of the EQ a little more to get the consonants come out a little more, i think it'll help a lot!