Design Critique

[melty]

I made a design but I feel it's lacking in something, lol.

What do you think?

 

[Yinitara]

It's really cute! I don't think it's missing anything, but if you feel like it is you can try adding bracelets or embellish her stockings a bit-- maybe add the design from her skirt on to them, if that helps. : )

 

[melty]

Hm, maybe that would work..

 

[Dae-dae]

It's very adorable! Perhaps a little beret or sailor hat (like Nana's); but this design is perfectly fine!

 

[kamonohashi]

Aaaaah, she's so adorable! To be honest, I think she'd just need some more color.