how to improve my originals

[amaterasu miya]

trust me
they suck

see
[video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQSfTC7BVjk&list=UUKjrRmDikJyKDTI2ejjjn7A[/video]

[video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Kkx_jRWkV4&list=UUKjrRmDikJyKDTI2ejjjn7A[/video]

[video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G10QqgAyNgQ&list=UUKjrRmDikJyKDTI2ejjjn7A[/video]

i'm really not proud of them >.>

 

[stormylullaby]

Iunno what you're talking about, I can already see improvement from your earlier originals & your newer ones :U

The only way to improve is to keep writing them. Don't stop writing them. & maybe learn some basic music theory if you don't know any/extend your music theory knowledge. I also suggest trying to write longer originals. But yeah, keep doing what you're doing & something will give :3

 

[amaterasu miya]

RE:

Iunno what you're talking about, I can already see improvement from your earlier originals & your newer ones :U

The only way to improve is to keep writing them. Don't stop writing them. & maybe learn some basic music theory if you don't know any/extend your music theory knowledge. I also suggest trying to write longer originals. But yeah, keep doing what you're doing & something will give :3

thank you
i'm going to fill my brain with music theory :3

 

[Kiyoteru]

RE:

Personally I'm impressed that you manage to finish and publish stuff, I have so many wip songs over here that I've planned something like 5 albums...