Critique Requested i tried a bit more and i think it paid off

[sof¡¡¡a]

Hello0o0o0
So I made another cover, and this time it's good... I guess?????' I used Kiki Sagawa and the song is "Two Breaths walking" (the reloaded version)
Here, let me know what you think!


**MANY THANKS TO CYBERBISON FOR THAT AMAZING VIDEO*

 

[Greenpatch]

I feel like some parts are too quiet even though I never heard this song before. Other than that, it's actually not bad at all.