Cover Looking for feedback on a Swedish cover

[shugo974]

I've been looking to doing something in Swedish for a while since I am learning the language, so I have decided to do a cover of the Swedish version of the song Waterloo by ABBA. I probably could have done it on UTAU but a) I haven't touched UTAU in ages and it won't load on my mac anymore. Heads up this is a really rough first draft I am looking for any criticism, feedback, ideas. Thank you/tack!

 

[jokester127]

Did you use arpasing? It makes covering songs in other languages with Eleanor much easier

 

[HulderBulder]

You may want to look up Swedish phonetics and try to find sounds that the voice has and also figure out what can be used as a substitute sound for the ones it lacks. Atm, the cover isn't very understandable since the kj/sj sounds have been replaced with a qui (?) sound, and some vowels are off like in "är" (should sound more like the e in heir).

 

[shugo974]

You may want to look up Swedish phonetics and try to find sounds that the voice has and also figure out what can be used as a substitute sound for the ones it lacks. Atm, the cover isn't very understandable since the kj/sj sounds have been replaced with a qui (?) sound, and some vowels are off like in "är" (should sound more like the e in heir).

Thanks for the input