Ugly doodle

Tenmei

Teto's Territory
Here's a pic of my utau Tenmei made in something like 10 minutes. This is the first time I draw him, so if he look too much like something that already exist, tell me and I'll change him.
( I know there are problems with proportion )
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His collar should be thinner (problem with proportions, I know).
Also, I have this idea that the button line and the piping on the collar are shaped like lightning. Minor modifications like that put life in an otherwise Crypton-esque design.
I'd suggest adjusting the colors, also. The current colors on the shirt remind me of Teto.
 
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Tenmei

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His collar should be thinner (problem with proportions, I know).
Also, I have this idea that the button line and the piping on the collar are shaped like lightning. Minor modifications like that put life in an otherwise Crypton-esque design.
I'd suggest adjusting the colors, also. The current colors on the shirt remind me of Teto.
Thank you a lot for your opinion :smile: