Critique Requested The Tailor Shop on of Enbizaka

[Worn-Out Shuu]

Credits in the SoundCloud description.

Critique requested because I want to see if I can open commissions.

 

[Kiyoteru]

What type of commissions are you planning to open?

 

[Worn-Out Shuu]

What type of commissions are you planning to open?

Mixing, but I would like more discussion before opening them.

 

[Kiyoteru]

You may want to use a voicebank other than Defoko to demonstrate your mixing skills, since most vocals you work with will be human rather than purely synthesized.
A mix is also more likely to be commissioned if it's particularly complex and can't be done on their own, so you might also want to demonstrate what you could do with multiple singers, unusual effects, etc.
As of right now there isn't much I can say about this particular demo. I'd be glad to offer feedback on something else though, whether it's something you've already made or are planning to make soon.

 

[Worn-Out Shuu]

You may want to use a voicebank other than Defoko to demonstrate your mixing skills, since most vocals you work with will be human rather than purely synthesized.
A mix is also more likely to be commissioned if it's particularly complex and can't be done on their own, so you might also want to demonstrate what you could do with multiple singers, unusual effects, etc.
As of right now there isn't much I can say about this particular demo. I'd be glad to offer feedback on something else though, whether it's something you've already made or are planning to make soon.

Thank you for replying, will try to give a better idea of the mixing I can do.