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HowlingWolf15

Ritsu's Renegades
Defender of Defoko
so yeah here's more of My Immortal: The UTAU ver.. Also, I just want to apologize to the following users, Carrotbunz, Sailor_Ravioli, Ryouichii, and Iris Dragonoure (esp. Iris since what Tree did to Kiseki) for raping your characters personalities in this my immortalediting mess. gomenasai *bows politely*

Chapter 10.

AN: stup it u gay bunlde of stiks if u donot lik ma story den fukk off! ps it turnz out b’loody kiiro isn’t a nomal utau afert al n he n nosferatu r evil datz y dey movd houses ok!

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I was really scared about Rkook all day. I was even upset went to rehearsals with my gothic metal band Bloodtau Gothic Rose 666. I am the lead singer of it and I play guitar. People say that we sound like a cross between GU, SlipTei and MCR. The other people in the band are B’loody Kiiro, Nosferatu, Roko, Keitai (although we call her Szatan now. She has black hair now with blue streaks in it.) and Cerrif. Only today Roko and Nosferatu were depressed so they weren’t coming and we wrote songs instead. I knew Roko was probably slitting his wrists (he wouldn’t die because he was a vampire too and the only way you can kill a vampire is with a c-r-o-s-s (there’s no way I’m writing that) or a steak) and Nosferatu was probably watching a depressing movie like The Corpse Bride. I put on a black leather shirt that showed off my chest and skinny matching tight jeans that said Simple OTO (Akio's band) on the butt. You might think I’m a manho but I’m really not.

We were singing a CV cover of ‘Helena’ and at the end of the song I suddenly bust into tears.

“Mario! Are you OK?” B’loody Kiiro asked in a concerted voice.

“What the **** do you think?” I asked angrily. And then I said. “Well, Rook came and the ****ing bastard told me to ****ing kill Asher! But I don’t want to kill him, because, he’s really nice, even if he did go out with Roko. But if I don’t kill Asher, then Rook, will ****ing kill Roko!” I burst into tears.
Suddenly Roko jumped out from behind a wall.

“Why didn’t you ****ing tell me!” he shouted. “How could you- you- you ****ing poser utau bitch!” (c is dat out of character?)

I started to cry and cry. Roko started to cry too all sensitive. Then he ran out crying.

We practiced for one more hour. Then suddenly Miko walked in angrily! Her eyes were all fiery and I knew this time it wasn’t cause she had a headache.

“What have you done!” She started to cry wisely. (c dats basically nut swering and dis time she wuz relly upset n u wil c y) “Mario Roko has been found in his room. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists.”

Chapter 11.

AN: i sed stup flaming up prepz! c if dis chaptr is srupid!1111 it delz wit rly sris issus! sp c 4 urself if itz ztupid brw fangzu~ 2 ma frend nadeko 4 hleping me!

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“NO!” I screamed. I was horrorfied! B’loody Kiiro tried to comfort me but I told him **** off and I ran to my room crying myself. Miko chased after me shouting but she had to stop when I went into my room cause she would look like a perv that way.

Anyway, I started crying tears of blood and then I slit both of my wrists. They got all over my clothes so I took them off and jumped into the bath angrily while I put on a Tuning Park song at full volume. I grabbed a steak and almost stuck it into my heart to commit suicide. I was so ****ing depressed! I got out of the bathtub and put on a black tshirt that had MCR and Good Utalotte and tight black skinny jeans with lace all over it sandly. I put on black high heels with pink metal stuff on the ends and six pairs of skull earrings. I couldn’t ****ing believe it. Then I looked out the window and screamed… Spedy was spying on me and he was taking a video tape of me! And Sekkei was masticating to it! They were sitting on their broomsticks.

“EW, YOU ****ING PERVS, STOP LOOKING AT ME NAKED! ARE YOU PEDOS OR WHAT!” I screamed putting on a black towel with a picture of WALTT on it. Suddenly Nosferatu ran in.

“A A I U E O!” he yelled at Speedy and Sekkei pointing his wumbst. I took my gun and shot Speedy and Sekkei a gazillion times and they both started screaming and the camera broke. Suddenly, Miyko ran in. “Mario, it has been revealed that someone has - NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” she shouted looking at Speedy and Sekkei and then she waved her ust and suddenly…

Cerrif ran outside on his mic and said everyone we need to talk.

“What do you know, Cerif? You’re just a little Utaforum student!”

“I MAY BE AN UTAFORUM STUDENT….” Cerif paused angrily. “BUT I AM ALSO A SATANIST!”

“This cannot be.” Spedy said in a crisp voice as blood dripped from his hand where Miyko's ust had shot him. “There must be other factors.”

“YOU DON’T HAVE ANY!” I yelled in madly.

Sekkei held up the camera triumelephantly. “The lens may be ruined but the tape is still there!”

I felt faint, more than I normally do like how it feels when you do not drink enough utau blood.

“Why are you doing this?” Sekkei said angrily while he rubbed his dirty hands on his clook.

And then I heard the words that I had heard before but not from him. I did not know whether to feel shocked and happy or to bite him and drink his blood because I felt faint.

“BECAUSE…BECAUSE….” Ceriff said and he paused in the air dramitaclly, waving his ust in the air. Then swooped he in singing to the tune of a gothic version of a song by 50 Cent.

“Because you’re goffic?” Spedy asked in a little afraid voice cause he was afraind it meant he was connected with Satan.

“Because I LOVE HIM!”

Chapter 12.

AN: stop f,aing ok cerif is a pedo 2 a lot of ppl in japahnesse skoolz r lik dat I wunted 2 adres da ishu! how du u no spedy iant kristian plus cerrif isn’t really in luv wif mario dat was kiseki ok!

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I was about to slit my wrists again with the silver knife that Rogo had given me in case anything happened to him. He had told me to use it valiantly against an enemy but I knew that we must both go together.

“NO!” I THOUGHT IT WAS CEARrif but it was Nosferatu. He started to scream. “OMFG! NOOOOO! MY HEAD HURTS!” and then….. his eyes rolled up! You could only see his red whites.

I stopped. “How did u know?”

“I saw it! And my freckles came back to my pale face!”

“NO!” I ran up closer. “I thought you didn’t have freckles anymore!” I shouted.

“I do but Szatan changed it into one big pentagram for me and I always cover it up with foundation.” he said back. “Anyway my head hurt and then my pentagram turned back into my freckles! Save me! then I had a vision of what was happening to Roko…………….Rook has him bondage!”

Anyway I was in the school nurse’s office now recovering from my slit wrists. Spedy and Sekkei and CEHRIFD were there too. They were going to St. Polkaloid’s after they recovered cause they were pedofiles and you can’t have those ****ing pervs teaching in a school with lots of hot utsu boiz. Miko had constipated the cideo camera they took of me naked. I put up my middle finger at them.

Anyway Cerif came into my hospital bed holding a bouquet of pink roses.

“Mairo I need to tell u somethnig.” he said in a v. serious voice, giving me the roses.

“**** off.” I told him. “You know I ****ing hate the color pink anyway, and I don’t like ****ed up preps like you.” I snapped. Cerof had been mean to me before for being gottik.

“No Mairo.” Hargrid says. “Those are not roses.”

“What, are they goffs too you poser prep?” I asked cause I was angry that he had brought me pink roses.

“I saved your life!” He yelled angrily. “No you didn’t I replied.” “You saved me from getting a Paris Hilton p- video made from your shower scene and being vued by Spedy and Sekkei.” Who MASTABATED (c is dat speld rong) to it he added silently.

“Whatever!” I yelled angirly.

He pointed his ust at the pink roses. “These aren’t roses.” He suddenly looked at them with an evil look in his eye and muttered Well If you wanted Honesty that’s all you haD TO SAY! .

“That’s not a spell that’s an MCR song.” I corrected him wisely.

“I know, I was just warming up my vocal cordes.” Then he screamed. “Werecom torelu maindo furuck (4 all u cool goffic maretu fans out, there, that is a tribute! specially for nadeko I love you girl!)imo noto okayo!”

And then the roses turned into a huge black flame floating in the middle of the air. And it was black. Now I knew he wasn’t a prep.

“OK I believe you now wtf is Roco?”

Cearifd rolled his eyes. I looked into the balls of flame but I could c nothing.

“U c, Mairro,” Miko said, watching the two of us watching the flame. “2 c wht iz n da flmes(HAHA U REVIEWRS FLAMES GEDDIT) u mst find urslf 1st, k?”

“I HAVE FOUND MYSELF OK YOU MEAN OLD shoujo!” Ceirif yelled. mIYKo lookd shockd. I guess she didn’t have a headache or else she would have said something back.

Cearift stormed off back into his bed. “U r a liar, prof mikoh ookah!”

Anyway when I got better I went upstairs and put on a long sleeved black shiry that was all ripped on the ends with lace on it. There was some corset stuff on the front. Then I put on black skirt with black fishnets and black high-heeled boots with pictures of Ritsu Namine on them. I put my hair all out around me so I looked like Samara from the Ring (if u don’t know who she iz ur a prep so fuk off!) and I put on blood-red lipstick, black eyeliner and black lip gloss.

“You look kawai, boi.” B’loody Kiiro said sadly. “Fangzu~ (geddit) you do too.” I said sadly too, but I was still upset. I slit both of my wrists feeling totally depressed and I sucked all the blood. I cried again in my bathroom and put the shades on so Spedy and Sekkei couldn’t spy on me this time. I went to some classes. Nosferatu was in the Hair of Tuning and Dynamics. He looked all depressed because Roko had disappeared and he had used to be in love with Roko. He was sucking some blood from a CVVC guy.

“Hi.” he said in a depressed way. “Hi back.” I said in an wqually said way.

We both looked at each other for some time. Asher had beautiful red gothic eyes so much like Rokos. Then……… we jumped on each other and started screwing each other.

“STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!” shouted Professor Shadowedgy who was watching us and so was everyone else.

“Nosferatu you ****er!” I said slapping him. “Stop trying to screw me. You know I loved Roko!” I shouted and then I ran away angrily.

Just then he started to scream. “OMFG! NOOOOO! MY HEAD HURTS!” and then….. his eyes rolled up! You could only see his red whites.

“NO!” I ran up closer.

“I thought you didn’t have freckles anymore!” I shouted.

“I do but Szatan changed it into one big pentagram for me and I always cover it up with foundation.” he said back. “Anyway my head hurt and then I had a vision of what was happening to Roko…………….Rook has him bondage!”

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SPECIAL FANGZ 2 NADEKO MY GOFFIX BLOOD SISTA WTF UR SUPPOZD 2 RIT DIS!11111111

HEY NADEKO DO U KNOW WHERE MY SWEATER I

Chapter 13.

AN: nadeko fangzu~ 4 gelpin me agen im sory ah tok ur postr of 96neko but dat gurl is such a fokin sexbom! PREPZ STOP FLAMIGNG!

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Nosferatu and I ran up the stairs looking for Miko. We were so scared.

“Miko Mikyo!” we both yelled. Miko came there.

“What is it that you want now you despicable snobs?” she asked angrily.

“Roik has Roko!” we shouted at the same time.

She laughed in an evil voice.

“No! Don’t! We need to save Roko!” we begged.

“No.” she said meanly. “I don’t give a darn what Rook does to Roko. Not after how much he misbehaved in school especially with YOU Mario.” she said while she frowned looking at me. “Besides I never liked him that much anyway.” then she walked away. Nosferatu started crying. “My Roko!” he moaned. (AN: don’t u fik gay guyz r lik so hot!)

“Its okay!” I tried to tell him but that didn’t stop him. He started to cry tears of blood. Then he had a brainstorm. “I had an idea!” he exclaimed.

“What?” I asked him.

“You’ll see.” he said. He took out his ust and did a cv stirng. Then…… suddenly we were in Roolk's lair!

We ran in with our usts out just as we heard a croon voice say. “KA KA KI KU KE KO!”
It was……………………………….. Rook!

Chapter 14.

AN: fuk off PREPZ ok! Nadeko fangzu~ 4 helpin agen. im sory ah kudnt update but I wuz derperessd n I had 2 go 2 da hospital kuz I slit muh rists. PS im nut updating til u giv me 10 god revoiws!

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WARNING: SUM OF DIS CHAPTA IS XTREMLY SCRAY. VIOWER EXCRETION ADVISD.

We ran to where Rooc was. It turned out that Rook wasn’t there. Instead the fat guy who killed Kiseki was. Roko was there crying tears of blood. Tree was torturing him. Nosferatu and I ran in front of Tree.

“Rid my sight you despicable preps!” he shouted as we started shooting him with the gun he Then suddenly he looked at me and he fell down with a lovey-dovey look in his eyes. “MarioIloveyouwiluhavesexwithme.” he said. (in dis he is sixteen yrs old so hes not a pedofile ok)

“Huh?” I asked.
”Mairo I love you will you have sex with me?” asked Tree. I started laughing crudely. “What the ****? You torture my bf and then you expect me to **** you? God, you are so ****ed up you ****ing bastard.” I said angrily. Then I stabbed him in the heart. Blood pored out of it like a fountain.

“Nooooooooooooo!” he screamed. He started screaming and running around. Then he fell down and died. I brust into tears sadly.

“Tree what art thou doing?” called Rook. Then…… he started coming! We could hear his high heels clacking to us. So we got on our microphones and we flew to Utaforum. We went to my room. Nosferatu went away. There I started crying.

“What’s wrong honey?” asked Rook taking off his clothes so we could screw. He had a sex-pack (geddit cuz hes so sexah) and a really huge you-know-what and everything.

“Its so unfair!” I yielded. “Why can’t I just be ugly or plain like all da other boys and preps here except for B’loody Kiiro, because he’s not ugly or anything.”

“Why would you wanna be ugly? I don’t like the preps anyway. They are such ****ing hos.” answered Roko.

“Yeah but everyone is in love with me! Like Speedy and Sekkei took a video of me naked. Cerif says he’s in love with me. Nosferatu likes me and now even Tree is in love with me! I just wanna be with you ok Roko! Why couldn’t Satan have made me less beautiful?” I shouted angrily. (an” don’t wory mairo isn’t a snob or anyfing but a lot of ppl hav told him hes pretty) “Im good at too many things! WHY CAN’T I JUST BE NORMAL? IT’S A ****ING CURSE!” I shouted and then I ran away.

Chapter 15.

AN: stup flaming ok! btw u suk frum no on evry tim sum1 flams me im gona slit muh ristsz! fangzu~ 2 nadeko 4 hlpein!

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“Mario Mario!” shouted Roko sadly. “No, please, come back!”

But I was too mad.

“Whatever! Now u can go anh have sex with Nosferatu!” I shouted. I stormed into my room and closed my black door with my blood-red key. It had a picture of WALTT on it. He looked so sexy in a way that reminded me of Roko and Nosferatu. I started to cry and weep. I took a razor and started to slit my wrists. I drank the blood all depressed. Then I looked at my black GU watch and noticed it was time to go to Tuning class.

I put on a short ripped black gothic shirt that said Anarchy on the front in blood red letters and tight skinny black shorts that was all ripped and a spiky belt. Under that I put on ripped black fishnets and boots that said Tarou all over them with blood red letters. I put my ebony black hair out. Anyway I went downstairs feeling all sad and depressed as usual. I did sum advanced Tuning work. I was turning a bloody pentagram into a black guitar. Suddenly the guitar turned to Roko!

“Mairo I love you!” he shouted sadly. “I dnot care what those ****er preps and posers fink. Ur da most beautiful boy in the world. Before I met you I used to want to commit suicide all the time. Now I just wanna ****ing be with you. I ****ing love you!.” Then……………. he started to sing “Da Chronicles of Mode1 and Mode2” (we considered it our song now cuz we fell in love when Tarou was singing it) right in front of the entire class! His singing voice was so amazing and gothic and sexxy like a cross between Ted, Tarou, Ruko, Kuroda and WALTT (AN: don’t u fink dos guyz r so hot. if u dnot no who dey r get da fuk out od hr!) .

“OMFG.” I said after he was finished. Some ****ing preps stared at us but I just stuck up my middle fingers (that were covered in black nail polish and were entwined with Roko’s now) at them. “I love you!” I said and then we started to kiss just like Mawarine Shuu (i fukin h8 dat bitch) and Defoko in Magnet. Then we went away holding hands. Sekkei shouted at us but he stopped cuz everyone was clapping by how sexy we looked 2gether. Then I saw a poster saying that MCR would have a concert in Utamede right then. We looked at each other all shocked and then we went 2gether.

Chapter 16.

AN: u no wut! sut up ok! proov 2 me ur nut prepz! nadeko u suk u fuken ho gimme bak mah fukijn swteet ur supsd 2 rit dis! Nadeko wtf u hoe ur suposd to dodis! BTW fangzu~ 2 Ayana 4 techin muh japnese!

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We ran happily to Utamede. There we saw the stage where GU had played. We ran in happly. MCR were there playing ‘Helena’. I was so ****ing happy! Ted looked even sexier than he did in da pictures. Even Roko thought so, I could totally see him getting an erection but it didn’t matter cuz I knew know that we were da only true ones for eachother. I was wearing a black leather tight skinny jeans, a sleeevless black shirt that said Ted on it, and black leather platinum boots with red ripped fishnets. Roko was wearing a black baggy MCR t-shirt and black baggy pants. Anyway, we stated moshing to Helena. We frenched. We ran up 2 the front of the band to stage-dive. Suddenly, Ted pulled off his mask. So did the others. We gasped. It wasn’t them at all. It was.,……………………….. Rook and da Arpasing Dealers!

“Wtf Roko im not going to a concert wid u!” I shouted angrily. “Not after what happened to me last time? Even if its MCR n u no how much I lik them”

“What cause we…you know…” he gadgetted uncomfortbli cause guys don’t like to talk a bout you-know-what.

“Yeah cause we you know!” I yielded in an angry voice.

“We won’t do that again.” Roko promised. “This time, we’re going with an ESCORT.”

“OMFG wtf/ Are you giving into the mainstream?” I asked. “So I guess ur a prep or a Christina or what now?”

“NO.” he muttered loudly.

“R u becoming a prep or what?” I shootd angrily.

“Mairo! I’m not! Pls come with me!” He fell down to his knees and started singing ‘Da MIDI is black’ by GU to me.

I was flattened cause that’s not even a single, he had memorized da lyrks just 4 me!

“OK then I guess I will have to.” I said and then we frenched 4 a while and I went up 2 my room.

B’loody Kiiro was standing there. “Hajimemashite boi.” he said happily (he spex Japanese so do i. dat menz ‘how do u do’ in japanese). “BTW Nadeko that ****ing poser got expuld. she failed al her klasses and she skepped math.” (an: NADEKO U FUKIN SUK! FUK U!)

“It serves that fuking bich right.” I laughed angrily.

Well anyway we where felling all deprezzed. We wutsched some goffic movies like Das niteMARE b4 xmas. “Maybe Nadeko will die too.” I said.

“Kawai.” B’loody Kiirr shook his head enrgtically lethrigcly. “Oh yeah o have a confession after she got expuld I murdered her and den sekkei eated her cause he’s a caniibakl.”

“Kawai.” I commnted happily . We talked to each other in silence for da rest uv da movie.

“OH HEY BTw, im going to a concert with roco tonight in Hogsmeade with mcr.” I sed. “ I need to wear like da hotset outfit EVA.”

B’Loody Kiirro Nodded ENREGeticALLlY. “Omfg totally lets go shopping.”

“In Hot Topic, right?” I asked, already getting out my spshcial Hot Topic Loiyalty carde.

“No.” My head snaped up.

‘WHAT?” my head spuin. I could not believe it. “B’Loody Kiiro are u a PREP?”

“NOOOO!NOOOO!” he laughed. “I found some cool goffic stores near Utaforum that’s all.”

“Hu told u abut them” I askd sure it would be Roco or Szatan or Nosferatu(don’t even SAY that nam to me!). Or me.

“Mikyo.” he sed. “Let me just call our mikes.”

“OMFFG MIKYYO?” I asked quietly.

“Yah I saw the map for Utameade on her desk.” he told me. “Come on let’s go.”

We were going in a few punkgoff stores SPECIALLY for the concerts in Utasmeade. The salesperson was OMG HOTTER THAN TED EXCEPT NOT CAUSE THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE and he gave me a few shirts. “We only have these for da real goffs.”

“Da real goffs?” Me and B’Loody Kiiro asked.

“Yah u wouldn’t believe how many posers ther are in this town man! Yesterday sekkei and spedy tried to buy a goffic camera pouch.” He shook his head. “I dint even no they had a camera.”

“OMFG NO THEIR GONNA SPY ON ME AGAIN!” I cried, running out of the changing room wearing a long black dress with lots of red tulle coming out and very low-cut with a huge slit.

“Oh my satan you have to buy that outfit” The salesperson said.

“Yeah it looks totlly hot.” said B’Loody Kiiro.

“You know what I am gona give it to you free cause u look really hot in that utfit. Hey are you gonna be at the concert tonight?” he asked.

“Yeah I am actually.” I looked back at him. “Hey BTW my name’s marino dark’ness dementia UTAU fuwa what’s yours?”

“Ruko.” He said and ran a hand through his black-dyed hair. “maybe I’ll see you there tonight.”

“Yeah I don’t think so cause I am going there with my bf roco you sick perv!” I yelled angrily, but before he could beg me to go with him, Ceriff flew in on his black mic looking worried. “OMFG MARINO U NEED OT GET BACK INTO THE CASTLE NOW!”
 
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Defender of Defoko
so yeah here's more of My Immortal: The UTAU ver.. Also, I just want to apologize to the following users, Carrotbunz, Sailor_Ravioli, Ryouichii, and Iris Dragonoure (esp. Iris since what Tree did to Kiseki) for raping your characters personalities in this my immortalediting mess. gomenasai *bows politely*

Chapter 10.

AN: stup it u gay bunlde of stiks if u donot lik ma story den fukk off! ps it turnz out b’loody kyou isn’t a nomal utau afert al n he n nosferatu r evil datz y dey movd houses ok!

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I was really scared about Rkook all day. I was even upset went to rehearsals with my gothic metal band Bloodtau Gothic Rose 666. I am the lead singer of it and I play guitar. People say that we sound like a cross between GU, SlipTei and MCR. The other people in the band are B’loody Kyou, Nosferatu, Roko, Keitai (although we call her Szatan now. She has black hair now with blue streaks in it.) and Cerrif. Only today Roko and Nosferatu were depressed so they weren’t coming and we wrote songs instead. I knew Roko was probably slitting his wrists (he wouldn’t die because he was a vampire too and the only way you can kill a vampire is with a c-r-o-s-s (there’s no way I’m writing that) or a steak) and Nosferatu was probably watching a depressing movie like The Corpse Bride. I put on a black leather shirt that showed off my chest and skinny matching tight jeans that said Simple OTO (Akio's band) on the butt. You might think I’m a manfriend but I’m really not.

We were singing a CV cover of ‘Helena’ and at the end of the song I suddenly bust into tears.

“Mario! Are you OK?” B’loody Kyou asked in a concerted voice.

“What the **** do you think?” I asked angrily. And then I said. “Well, Rook came and the ****ing bastard told me to ****ing kill Asher! But I don’t want to kill him, because, he’s really nice, even if he did go out with Roko. But if I don’t kill Asher, then Rook, will ****ing kill Roko!” I burst into tears.
Suddenly Roko jumped out from behind a wall.

“Why didn’t you ****ing tell me!” he shouted. “How could you- you- you ****ing poser utau bitch!” (c is dat out of character?)

I started to cry and cry. Roko started to cry too all sensitive. Then he ran out crying.

We practiced for one more hour. Then suddenly Miko walked in angrily! Her eyes were all fiery and I knew this time it wasn’t cause she had a headache.

“What have you done!” She started to cry wisely. (c dats basically nut swering and dis time she wuz relly upset n u wil c y) “Mario Roko has been found in his room. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists.”

Chapter 11.

AN: i sed stup flaming up prepz! c if dis chaptr is srupid!1111 it delz wit rly sris issus! sp c 4 urself if itz ztupid brw fangzu~ 2 ma frend nadeko 4 hleping me!

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“NO!” I screamed. I was horrorfied! B’loody Kyou tried to comfort me but I told him **** off and I ran to my room crying myself. Miko chased after me shouting but she had to stop when I went into my room cause she would look like a perv that way.

Anyway, I started crying tears of blood and then I slit both of my wrists. They got all over my clothes so I took them off and jumped into the bath angrily while I put on a Tuning Park song at full volume. I grabbed a steak and almost stuck it into my heart to commit suicide. I was so ****ing depressed! I got out of the bathtub and put on a black tshirt that had MCR and Good Utalotte and tight black skinny jeans with lace all over it sandly. I put on black high heels with pink metal stuff on the ends and six pairs of skull earrings. I couldn’t ****ing believe it. Then I looked out the window and screamed… Spedy was spying on me and he was taking a video tape of me! And Sekkei was masticating to it! They were sitting on their broomsticks.

“EW, YOU ****ING PERVS, STOP LOOKING AT ME NAKED! ARE YOU PEDOS OR WHAT!” I screamed putting on a black towel with a picture of WALTT on it. Suddenly Nosferatu ran in.

“A A I U E O!” he yelled at Speedy and Sekkei pointing his wumbst. I took my gun and shot Speedy and Sekkei a gazillion times and they both started screaming and the camera broke. Suddenly, Miyko ran in. “Mario, it has been revealed that someone has - NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” she shouted looking at Speedy and Sekkei and then she waved her ust and suddenly…

Cerrif ran outside on his mic and said everyone we need to talk.

“What do you know, Cerif? You’re just a little Utaforum student!”

“I MAY BE AN UTAFORUM STUDENT….” Cerif paused angrily. “BUT I AM ALSO A SATANIST!”

“This cannot be.” Spedy said in a crisp voice as blood dripped from his hand where Miyko's ust had shot him. “There must be other factors.”

“YOU DON’T HAVE ANY!” I yelled in madly.

Sekkei held up the camera triumelephantly. “The lens may be ruined but the tape is still there!”

I felt faint, more than I normally do like how it feels when you do not drink enough utau blood.

“Why are you doing this?” Sekkei said angrily while he rubbed his dirty hands on his clook.

And then I heard the words that I had heard before but not from him. I did not know whether to feel shocked and happy or to bite him and drink his blood because I felt faint.

“BECAUSE…BECAUSE….” Ceriff said and he paused in the air dramitaclly, waving his ust in the air. Then swooped he in singing to the tune of a gothic version of a song by 50 Cent.

“Because you’re goffic?” Spedy asked in a little afraid voice cause he was afraind it meant he was connected with Satan.

“Because I LOVE HIM!”

Chapter 12.

AN: stop f,aing ok cerif is a pedo 2 a lot of ppl in japahnesse skoolz r lik dat I wunted 2 adres da ishu! how du u no spedy iant kristian plus cerrif isn’t really in luv wif mario dat was kiseki ok!

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I was about to slit my wrists again with the silver knife that Rogo had given me in case anything happened to him. He had told me to use it valiantly against an enemy but I knew that we must both go together.

“NO!” I THOUGHT IT WAS CEARrif but it was Nosferatu. He started to scream. “OMFG! NOOOOO! MY HEAD HURTS!” and then….. his eyes rolled up! You could only see his red whites.

I stopped. “How did u know?”

“I saw it! And my freckles came back to my pale face!”

“NO!” I ran up closer. “I thought you didn’t have freckles anymore!” I shouted.

“I do but Szatan changed it into one big pentagram for me and I always cover it up with foundation.” he said back. “Anyway my head hurt and then my pentagram turned back into my freckles! Save me! then I had a vision of what was happening to Roko…………….Rook has him bondage!”

Anyway I was in the school nurse’s office now recovering from my slit wrists. Spedy and Sekkei and CEHRIFD were there too. They were going to St. Polkaloid’s after they recovered cause they were pedofiles and you can’t have those ****ing pervs teaching in a school with lots of hot utsu boiz. Miko had constipated the cideo camera they took of me naked. I put up my middle finger at them.

Anyway Cerif came into my hospital bed holding a bouquet of pink roses.

“Mairo I need to tell u somethnig.” he said in a v. serious voice, giving me the roses.

“**** off.” I told him. “You know I ****ing hate the color pink anyway, and I don’t like ****ed up preps like you.” I snapped. Cerof had been mean to me before for being gottik.

“No Mairo.” Hargrid says. “Those are not roses.”

“What, are they goffs too you poser prep?” I asked cause I was angry that he had brought me pink roses.

“I saved your life!” He yelled angrily. “No you didn’t I replied.” “You saved me from getting a Paris Hilton p- video made from your shower scene and being vued by Spedy and Sekkei.” Who MASTABATED (c is dat speld rong) to it he added silently.

“Whatever!” I yelled angirly.

He pointed his ust at the pink roses. “These aren’t roses.” He suddenly looked at them with an evil look in his eye and muttered Well If you wanted Honesty that’s all you haD TO SAY! .

“That’s not a spell that’s an MCR song.” I corrected him wisely.

“I know, I was just warming up my vocal cordes.” Then he screamed. “Werecom torelu maindo furuck (4 all u cool goffic maretu fans out, there, that is a tribute! specially for nadeko I love you girl!)imo noto okayo!”

And then the roses turned into a huge black flame floating in the middle of the air. And it was black. Now I knew he wasn’t a prep.

“OK I believe you now wtf is Roco?”

Cearifd rolled his eyes. I looked into the balls of flame but I could c nothing.

“U c, Mairro,” Miko said, watching the two of us watching the flame. “2 c wht iz n da flmes(HAHA U REVIEWRS FLAMES GEDDIT) u mst find urslf 1st, k?”

“I HAVE FOUND MYSELF OK YOU MEAN OLD shoujo!” Ceirif yelled. mIYKo lookd shockd. I guess she didn’t have a headache or else she would have said something back.

Cearift stormed off back into his bed. “U r a liar, prof mikoh ookah!”

Anyway when I got better I went upstairs and put on a long sleeved black shiry that was all ripped on the ends with lace on it. There was some corset stuff on the front. Then I put on black skirt with black fishnets and black high-heeled boots with pictures of Ritsu Namine on them. I put my hair all out around me so I looked like Samara from the Ring (if u don’t know who she iz ur a prep so fuk off!) and I put on blood-red lipstick, black eyeliner and black lip gloss.

“You look kawai, boi.” B’loody Kyou said sadly. “Fangzu~ (geddit) you do too.” I said sadly too, but I was still upset. I slit both of my wrists feeling totally depressed and I sucked all the blood. I cried again in my bathroom and put the shades on so Spedy and Sekkei couldn’t spy on me this time. I went to some classes. Nosferatu was in the Hair of Tuning and Dynamics. He looked all depressed because Roko had disappeared and he had used to be in love with Roko. He was sucking some blood from a CVVC guy.

“Hi.” he said in a depressed way. “Hi back.” I said in an wqually said way.

We both looked at each other for some time. Asher had beautiful red gothic eyes so much like Rokos. Then……… we jumped on each other and started screwing each other.

“STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!” shouted Professor Shadowedgy who was watching us and so was everyone else.

“Nosferatu you ****er!” I said slapping him. “Stop trying to screw me. You know I loved Roko!” I shouted and then I ran away angrily.

Just then he started to scream. “OMFG! NOOOOO! MY HEAD HURTS!” and then….. his eyes rolled up! You could only see his red whites.

“NO!” I ran up closer.

“I thought you didn’t have freckles anymore!” I shouted.

“I do but Szatan changed it into one big pentagram for me and I always cover it up with foundation.” he said back. “Anyway my head hurt and then I had a vision of what was happening to Roko…………….Rook has him bondage!”

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SPECIAL FANGZ 2 NADEKO MY GOFFIX BLOOD SISTA WTF UR SUPPOZD 2 RIT DIS!11111111

HEY NADEKO DO U KNOW WHERE MY SWEATER I

Chapter 13.

AN: nadeko fangzu~ 4 gelpin me agen im sory ah tok ur postr of 96neko but dat gurl is such a fokin sexbom! PREPZ STOP FLAMIGNG!

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Nosferatu and I ran up the stairs looking for Miko. We were so scared.

“Miko Mikyo!” we both yelled. Miko came there.

“What is it that you want now you despicable snobs?” she asked angrily.

“Roik has Roko!” we shouted at the same time.

She laughed in an evil voice.

“No! Don’t! We need to save Roko!” we begged.

“No.” she said meanly. “I don’t give a darn what Rook does to Roko. Not after how much he misbehaved in school especially with YOU Mario.” she said while she frowned looking at me. “Besides I never liked him that much anyway.” then she walked away. Nosferatu started crying. “My Roko!” he moaned. (AN: don’t u fik gay guyz r lik so hot!)

“Its okay!” I tried to tell him but that didn’t stop him. He started to cry tears of blood. Then he had a brainstorm. “I had an idea!” he exclaimed.

“What?” I asked him.

“You’ll see.” he said. He took out his ust and did a cv stirng. Then…… suddenly we were in Roolk's lair!

We ran in with our usts out just as we heard a croon voice say. “KA KA KI KU KE KO!”
It was……………………………….. Rook!

Chapter 14.

AN: fuk off PREPZ ok! Nadeko fangzu~ 4 helpin agen. im sory ah kudnt update but I wuz derperessd n I had 2 go 2 da hospital kuz I slit muh rists. PS im nut updating til u giv me 10 god revoiws!

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WARNING: SUM OF DIS CHAPTA IS XTREMLY SCRAY. VIOWER EXCRETION ADVISD.

We ran to where Rooc was. It turned out that Rook wasn’t there. Instead the fat guy who killed Kiseki was. Roko was there crying tears of blood. Tree was torturing him. Nosferatu and I ran in front of Tree.

“Rid my sight you despicable preps!” he shouted as we started shooting him with the gun he Then suddenly he looked at me and he fell down with a lovey-dovey look in his eyes. “MarioIloveyouwiluhavesexwithme.” he said. (in dis he is sixteen yrs old so hes not a pedofile ok)

“Huh?” I asked.
”Mairo I love you will you have sex with me?” asked Tree. I started laughing crudely. “What the ****? You torture my bf and then you expect me to **** you? God, you are so ****ed up you ****ing bastard.” I said angrily. Then I stabbed him in the heart. Blood pored out of it like a fountain.

“Nooooooooooooo!” he screamed. He started screaming and running around. Then he fell down and died. I brust into tears sadly.

“Tree what art thou doing?” called Rook. Then…… he started coming! We could hear his high heels clacking to us. So we got on our microphones and we flew to Utaforum. We went to my room. Nosferatu went away. There I started crying.

“What’s wrong honey?” asked Rook taking off his clothes so we could screw. He had a sex-pack (geddit cuz hes so sexah) and a really huge you-know-what and everything.

“Its so unfair!” I yielded. “Why can’t I just be ugly or plain like all da other boys and preps here except for B’loody Kyou, because he’s not ugly or anything.”

“Why would you wanna be ugly? I don’t like the preps anyway. They are such ****ing friends.” answered Roko.

“Yeah but everyone is in love with me! Like Speedy and Sekkei took a video of me naked. Cerif says he’s in love with me. Nosferatu likes me and now even Tree is in love with me! I just wanna be with you ok Roko! Why couldn’t Satan have made me less beautiful?” I shouted angrily. (an” don’t wory mairo isn’t a snob or anyfing but a lot of ppl hav told him hes pretty) “Im good at too many things! WHY CAN’T I JUST BE NORMAL? IT’S A ****ING CURSE!” I shouted and then I ran away.

Chapter 15.

AN: stup flaming ok! btw u suk frum no on evry tim sum1 flams me im gona slit muh ristsz! fangzu~ 2 nadeko 4 hlpein!

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“Mario Mario!” shouted Roko sadly. “No, please, come back!”

But I was too mad.

“Whatever! Now u can go anh have sex with Nosferatu!” I shouted. I stormed into my room and closed my black door with my blood-red key. It had a picture of WALTT on it. He looked so sexy in a way that reminded me of Roko and Nosferatu. I started to cry and weep. I took a razor and started to slit my wrists. I drank the blood all depressed. Then I looked at my black GU watch and noticed it was time to go to Tuning class.

I put on a short ripped black gothic shirt that said Anarchy on the front in blood red letters and tight skinny black shorts that was all ripped and a spiky belt. Under that I put on ripped black fishnets and boots that said Tarou all over them with blood red letters. I put my ebony black hair out. Anyway I went downstairs feeling all sad and depressed as usual. I did sum advanced Tuning work. I was turning a bloody pentagram into a black guitar. Suddenly the guitar turned to Roko!

“Mairo I love you!” he shouted sadly. “I dnot care what those ****er preps and posers fink. Ur da most beautiful boy in the world. Before I met you I used to want to commit suicide all the time. Now I just wanna ****ing be with you. I ****ing love you!.” Then……………. he started to sing “Da Chronicles of Mode1 and Mode2” (we considered it our song now cuz we fell in love when Tarou was singing it) right in front of the entire class! His singing voice was so amazing and gothic and sexxy like a cross between Ted, Tarou, Ruko, Kuroda and WALTT (AN: don’t u fink dos guyz r so hot. if u dnot no who dey r get da fuk out od hr!) .

“OMFG.” I said after he was finished. Some ****ing preps stared at us but I just stuck up my middle fingers (that were covered in black nail polish and were entwined with Roko’s now) at them. “I love you!” I said and then we started to kiss just like Mawarine Shuu (i fukin h8 dat bitch) and Defoko in Magnet. Then we went away holding hands. Sekkei shouted at us but he stopped cuz everyone was clapping by how sexy we looked 2gether. Then I saw a poster saying that MCR would have a concert in Utamede right then. We looked at each other all shocked and then we went 2gether.

Chapter 16.

AN: u no wut! sut up ok! proov 2 me ur nut prepz! nadeko u suk u fuken ho gimme bak mah fukijn swteet ur supsd 2 rit dis! Nadeko wtf u hoe ur suposd to dodis! BTW fangzu~ 2 Ayana 4 techin muh japnese!

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We ran happily to Utamede. There we saw the stage where GU had played. We ran in happly. MCR were there playing ‘Helena’. I was so ****ing happy! Ted looked even sexier than he did in da pictures. Even Roko thought so, I could totally see him getting an erection but it didn’t matter cuz I knew know that we were da only true ones for eachother. I was wearing a black leather tight skinny jeans, a sleeevless black shirt that said Ted on it, and black leather platinum boots with red ripped fishnets. Roko was wearing a black baggy MCR t-shirt and black baggy pants. Anyway, we stated moshing to Helena. We frenched. We ran up 2 the front of the band to stage-dive. Suddenly, Ted pulled off his mask. So did the others. We gasped. It wasn’t them at all. It was.,……………………….. Rook and da Arpasing Dealers!

“Wtf Roko im not going to a concert wid u!” I shouted angrily. “Not after what happened to me last time? Even if its MCR n u no how much I lik them”

“What cause we…you know…” he gadgetted uncomfortbli cause guys don’t like to talk a bout you-know-what.

“Yeah cause we you know!” I yielded in an angry voice.

“We won’t do that again.” Roko promised. “This time, we’re going with an ESCORT.”

“OMFG wtf/ Are you giving into the mainstream?” I asked. “So I guess ur a prep or a Christina or what now?”

“NO.” he muttered loudly.

“R u becoming a prep or what?” I shootd angrily.

“Mairo! I’m not! Pls come with me!” He fell down to his knees and started singing ‘Da MIDI is black’ by GU to me.

I was flattened cause that’s not even a single, he had memorized da lyrks just 4 me!

“OK then I guess I will have to.” I said and then we frenched 4 a while and I went up 2 my room.

B’loody Kyou was standing there. “Hajimemashite boi.” he said happily (he spex Japanese so do i. dat menz ‘how do u do’ in japanese). “BTW Nadeko that ****ing poser got expuld. she failed al her klasses and she skepped math.” (an: NADEKO U FUKIN SUK! FUK U!)

“It serves that fuking bich right.” I laughed angrily.

Well anyway we where felling all deprezzed. We wutsched some goffic movies like Das niteMARE b4 xmas. “Maybe Nadeko will die too.” I said.

“Kawai.” B’loody Kyoo shook his head enrgtically lethrigcly. “Oh yeah o have a confession after she got expuld I murdered her and den sekkei eated her cause he’s a caniibakl.”

“Kawai.” I commnted happily . We talked to each other in silence for da rest uv da movie.

“OH HEY BTw, im going to a concert with roco tonight in Hogsmeade with mcr.” I sed. “ I need to wear like da hotset outfit EVA.”

B’Loody Kyoou Nodded ENREGeticALLlY. “Omfg totally lets go shopping.”

“In Hot Topic, right?” I asked, already getting out my spshcial Hot Topic Loiyalty carde.

“No.” My head snaped up.

‘WHAT?” my head spuin. I could not believe it. “B’Loody Kyou are u a PREP?”

“NOOOO!NOOOO!” he laughed. “I found some cool goffic stores near Utaforum that’s all.”

“Hu told u abut them” I askd sure it would be Roco or Szatan or Nosferatu(don’t even SAY that nam to me!). Or me.

“Mikyo.” he sed. “Let me just call our mikes.”

“OMFFG MIKYYO?” I asked quietly.

“Yah I saw the map for Utameade on her desk.” he told me. “Come on let’s go.”

We were going in a few punkgoff stores SPECIALLY for the concerts in Utasmeade. The salesperson was OMG HOTTER THAN TED EXCEPT NOT CAUSE THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE and he gave me a few shirts. “We only have these for da real goffs.”

“Da real goffs?” Me and B’Loody Kyou asked.

“Yah u wouldn’t believe how many posers ther are in this town man! Yesterday sekkei and spedy tried to buy a goffic camera pouch.” He shook his head. “I dint even no they had a camera.”

“OMFG NO THEIR GONNA SPY ON ME AGAIN!” I cried, running out of the changing room wearing a long black dress with lots of red tulle coming out and very low-cut with a huge slit.

“Oh my satan you have to buy that outfit” The salesperson said.

“Yeah it looks totlly hot.” said B’Loody Kyou.

“You know what I am gona give it to you free cause u look really hot in that utfit. Hey are you gonna be at the concert tonight?” he asked.

“Yeah I am actually.” I looked back at him. “Hey BTW my name’s marino dark’ness dementia UTAU way what’s yours?”

“Ruko.” He said and ran a hand through his black-dyed hair. “maybe I’ll see you there tonight.”

“Yeah I don’t think so cause I am going there with my bf roco you sick perv!” I yelled angrily, but before he could beg me to go with him, Ceriff flew in on his black mic looking worried. “OMFG MARINO U NEED OT GET BACK INTO THE CASTLE NOW!”

Oh yeah...
RIP my sanity
 
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